Good story but i've grown sick of characters getting a Chinese and a Japanese name because authors don't bother to proof read their translation like kurenai is also called hong? Her dad is a she and then a he? Really try to put some pride in your work not what ever you want to call this.
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!