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TRASH TOO MUCH NONSENSE WITHOUT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT MANY INFORMATION WITHOUT EXPLANATIONF IT WAS EASY TO READ BUT YOU WRITE WITHOUT EXPLAINING YOUR MAKING THE READER HARD TO UNDERSTAND

Tensura: Suzumebachi

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This is actually 100% true. I will make the character development at around chap 20 and I like making puzzles for the readers. Love you all