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This review is written after 20 something chapters Pros: its a wish fulfilling fantasy Author has a nice update speed Growth speed of mc is great Cons Characters feel lacking No proper world explaination Mc is a simp at start suggestions Add chapters from different POVs Add a long time quest given by system
Face-Slapping System
StiffStick
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StiffStick:Alright. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll try my best to improve this points, especially the characters, do you mind elaborating more about how they feel lacking? I want to improve so your suggestions are more than welcome. As for the world building part, I prefer to do it slowly to avoid info dumps on the early chapters.
StiffStick作者StiffStick
Alright. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll try my best to improve this points, especially the characters, do you mind elaborating more about how they feel lacking? I want to improve so your suggestions are more than welcome. As for the world building part, I prefer to do it slowly to avoid info dumps on the early chapters.