Review Detail of ZenRoiver in You are My Glory,My Treasure, My Fifty Shades
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The overall flow of the story is good. I love how you end up putting songs and other stuff in it as it related to real-life scenarios. There are hardly any grammar mistakes and the way you peace the sentences of good....for a beginner that is. I'll be waiting for the newest chaps. Good luck!
You are My Glory,My Treasure, My Fifty Shades
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Thank you so much! well putting in songs here and there is inspired from real me, my brain puts songs in my head whenever i feel strong emotions of any kind and this also gives an idea of what song would fit it if it ever gets adapted to a movie! lol by the way your novel's really great too! putting a review in some time!