"The story is actually interesting, but you write it like a fable, and it doesn't look like a novel. You write too little dialogue, and the chapters are too short. Honestly, your writing quality is very engaging for readers, but you don't provide enough dialogue. However, overall, it's very engaging and good."
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!