Review Detail of chefs4 in Hunter x Hunter: Gen's Adventure! [ HxH ]
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I will make this a great piece of work. I Hope everyone comments because it helps me A LOT making this series. I hope you read every chapter because i worked hard for it!
Hunter x Hunter: Gen's Adventure! [ HxH ]
chefs4
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I hope that you will improve the way of writing because I do not understand anything and you do not show me how the characters think in order to understand their characters that they are more like robots. And the main character looks like a copy of gon only. You did not explain anything important about him. You just said that he is a brother. You did not explain his appearance, how old he is, or how his character is. I really hope the story improves. There are a few FF Hunters and most of them are dropped
Its because, honestly I didn't like the theme of it and I didn't finish watching it. I'm sorry if you are a big fan of the arc.
HarryBlack:can we know why you won't add chimera ant arc?
I will try to improve in the things you said. In the hunter exams I will make more explaining to their characters. I also hope that you don't judge this book by its first chapters because this is the first time I'm writing a book.
Ozenn:I hope that you will improve the way of writing because I do not understand anything and you do not show me how the characters think in order to understand their characters that they are more like robots. And the main character looks like a copy of gon only. You did not explain anything important about him. You just said that he is a brother. You did not explain his appearance, how old he is, or how his character is. I really hope the story improves. There are a few FF Hunters and most of them are dropped
You should watch it, the arc at the first watch was tiring for me too, but its got some good moments, also i dont mind if you upload slowed just make sure to not drop
chefs4:Its because, honestly I didn't like the theme of it and I didn't finish watching it. I'm sorry if you are a big fan of the arc.
_Water_:You should watch it, the arc at the first watch was tiring for me too, but its got some good moments, also i dont mind if you upload slowed just make sure to not drop
chefs4:Its because, honestly I didn't like the theme of it and I didn't finish watching it. I'm sorry if you are a big fan of the arc.
i suggest comparing to popular works to see how to fix the writing with a side by side. Id say keep going as you get better at that point you can edit the start or rewrite it... Good luck👍
chefs4:I will try to improve in the things you said. In the hunter exams I will make more explaining to their characters. I also hope that you don't judge this book by its first chapters because this is the first time I'm writing a book.
DongLong:i suggest comparing to popular works to see how to fix the writing with a side by side. Id say keep going as you get better at that point you can edit the start or rewrite it... Good luck👍