Review Detail of Blooddoctor in My Pink Cinderella

I can sense that this author is an amateur because there are many typographical errs, punctuation errs, long paragraphs and childish dialogues. I believe this book has something to give to the world, it only needs thorough editing. Author, please you need to read many books and research in other to know how words are supposed to be written in order to look presentable. I can sense that this book has an interesting plot, I will just advise the author to edit and edit and edit.