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Item: The Book is dropped
Rating: 3.6

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Demons_and_ILv41yrDemons_and_I

This book isn't bad at all. But there are a few glaring issues. Grammar is decent apart from a few errors, but punctuation is a real issue. I still don't know if the protagonist is a girl or boy, cause you didn't tell us. Story is very unique and nicely paced, but there is still room for improvement

The Book is dropped

KexoHD

3の人に「いいね!」しました

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KexoHD作者KexoHD

btw your still reading the old chapters, chapter 21 is the new ones...

Demons_and_I:No problemo 😁😈😈😈

1yr

KexoHD作者KexoHD

Im currently on fixing that issue, and I think I did a good job after the prologue

1yr

KexoHD作者KexoHD

do your worse, I want a fully honest review

1yr

Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

No problemo 😁😈😈😈

KexoHD:do your worse, I want a fully honest review

1yr

KexoHD作者KexoHD

Will wait with great glee

Demons_and_I:No problemo 😁😈😈😈

1yr

Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

While I do yours, can you also do a review of my own novel? I have edited the earlier chapters, so I want to see what you think. I also want you to be as honest as possible. 👍

KexoHD:Will wait with great glee

1yr

KexoHD作者KexoHD

I will do it when I wake up but please do the actual chapters... and not the prologue

Demons_and_I:While I do yours, can you also do a review of my own novel? I have edited the earlier chapters, so I want to see what you think. I also want you to be as honest as possible. 👍

1yr

Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

I will... But it's a bit confusing, y'know?

KexoHD:I will do it when I wake up but please do the actual chapters... and not the prologue

1yr

Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

I'm done with the review and chapter comments. Good job and I hope you keep up the good work. Also, when can you get to doing mine? I haven't seen a single comment or review from you?

KexoHD:I will do it when I wake up but please do the actual chapters... and not the prologue

1yr