Potential but you ruined it
Holo_Lover
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He switched versus too early
MkJ:Thank you for letting us know how it was ruined and how it could be improved.
Thank you for letting us know how it was ruined and how it could be improved.
Tesnura verse had a lot of potential and was even hinting at things and author decided to just switch verses for pretty much no reason other then he was probaly bored
