author... the plot is very good and realistic. I absolutely loved the idea but maybe after writing try to run your eyes through what you've just written. Don't take this as a negative comment but kindly do so. In many parts there are some spelling errors which I know is not done intentionally, while writing digitally typing mistakes occur... even for með Overall very nice... I've commented on your paragraphs, kindly check them out. Also, please view my novel and comment on the plot...
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ãããArjun_Sharma_6113:Actually you didn't told me your novel name. Tell me so I can read.