Review Detail of Rin_Nurnia in Aiden's Secret

The story seems interesting since I love mystery genre but I wanted to give some suggestion. You may try to fix the pov. In the first few paragraphs it's the first pov but then it changed to third pov. If you want to change it, you can try use symbols before writing diff pov on the next paragraphs. Also, it looks like you used (-...) symbol instead of the quotation dialogue which is this symbol ("....")