Review Detail of ObamaUchiha in RWBY: System

Item: RWBY: System
Rating: 3

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ObamaUchihaLv41yrObamaUchiha

the pacing is absolute hot garbage. the fight scenes have barely any description which ties into the pacing. system stats need a little explanation. alot of another nitpicks that just make it unenjoyable to read

RWBY: System

Toist_New_Moon

3の人に「いいね!」しました

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Toist_New_Moon作者Toist_New_Moon

yeah, because I want to make this novel as something I would do if I ever where to get some busted ability and go to RWBY, and the pacing is supposed to be fast in before the story. And ok +bread 👍🍞

1yr

ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

if you dont care than neither shall i

Toist_New_Moon:yeah, because I want to make this novel as something I would do if I ever where to get some busted ability and go to RWBY, and the pacing is supposed to be fast in before the story. And ok +bread 👍🍞

1yr

ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

fast paced to the point of unenjoyable

Toist_New_Moon:yeah, because I want to make this novel as something I would do if I ever where to get some busted ability and go to RWBY, and the pacing is supposed to be fast in before the story. And ok +bread 👍🍞

1yr

Toist_New_Moon作者Toist_New_Moon

meh, I'll add filler chapters then

1yr