Review Detail of Taragorm in Harry Potter : Ancient Magic

Item: Harry Potter : Ancient Magic
Rating: 4.4

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TaragormLv12yrTaragorm

Currently chapter 9 Brillant. Definitely worth a read. Only problem is the lack of character interactions the lack of dialogue is really apparent. It will suffer in later chapters if the novel remains focused on the internal thoughts of the mc as that will get really dull. Honestly really good so far

Harry Potter : Ancient Magic

Guryon

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Guryon作者Guryon

Thanks for the feedback. I plan to improve the interaction with the characters. The important point is that it's only the first week at Hogwarts, and I decided to use those first few days at school to create the Mc plot. Thanks again

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