Review Detail of f0011 in Tenth author's journal 2A: Mikhail

Really unique set of a fantasy story from my perspective, and it's something personal but i found it funny and cool how you put "The End" at the end of your chapters, gives the story a dramatic twist. I do suggest you to divide the sentences a bit more, i often saw some walls of text but it didn't bother me that much, well done on this one.