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I love the book. The grammar is on a pint and I haven't seen any mistakes but I have some things to point out. In the beginning of the faster chapter you didn't say who'sPOV it was. Like some people might get confused. So it would be nice if at the beginning of each chapter you say who'sPOv it is. Otherwise it's a great book.

Bizzare Tales Of My Mysterious Pet Shop

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Thanks for the review. Actually I purposefully didn't mentioned any pov because this novel at beginning is written from MC's POV as in first person. So I thought it would be self explanatory in itself.