Review Detail of The_Puffer in what's wrong with being a cyberpunk?
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This is not about cyberpunk 2077 Just so everybody knows. Mc Just gets thrown in a random world and needs to compete against players or something. And he needs to find something to change worlds? The whole story is confusing and Just throws you in the action. Its like a fanfic where we need to know the world beforehand. He gets a crew but they are some sort of Ai and self aware. Mc Just meet with 2 People from the crew and then gets sent to a race. Some chapters are too short. The grammar is good. World building is done poorly We have no characters designs. Story development is Fast. Maybe too Fast. Updating is Fast, but that is to be expected from a New story.
what's wrong with being a cyberpunk?
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"Sometimes things aren't clear right away. That's where you need to be patient and persevere and see where things lead." I understand but it is not based on cyberpunk 2077. The plot is confusing because the questions will be answered later. He doesn't need to change worlds tho. He needs to get out of the game. As far as characters and world-building are concerned, I feel that too. I'm working on it further. Originally, it was supposed to have reference pictures for concept but webnovel does not have that feature. Thanks for the review. This is definitely helpful to me. :)