Review Detail of Theothegiant in The Battle Cries

Interesting story tho it takes a while to start, the first chapter was mostly world explanation and that's something you might want to keep short in the beginning and explain the rest through dialogue and hints or having the mc figure out, most people will just scroll past all of it or drop the book entirely so keep that in mind, other than that the descriptions are good and your choice of words were far from repetitive.