Review Detail of Seriously_A_weeb in The Waifu App In The Apocalypse

It’s a good story but a little fast paced is really the only thing that stands out other then the typos, but the fast paced story could lose the readers because they aren’t able to let it sink in( I guess). Regardless I love your story, plot, character personality’s, and the descriptive writing I guess since it’s the beginning it might just be fast paced because of that, which in that case there is only the minor typos here and there