Review Detail of Little_North_Star in Rejected Alpha

Item: Rejected Alpha
Rating: 3.6

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Little_North_StarLv131yrLittle_North_Star

Its a good story i enjoyed the plot And the aim youre going For, do try to break it into smaller paragraphs and also more focused on your grammatical accuracy[img=recommend]

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Rosy_786

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Rosy_786作者Rosy_786

Thanks for letting me know. I will try it break it more into small paragraphs.

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