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BlackFanLv52yr
2022-09-18 05:02

Overall a very plain writing style and story. But it is curious and even paradoxical that, that same plain quality helps somewhat the reading. The problem is that, as usual, and given that this is a story in the "modern world", "glorified racism" rapidly shows it ugly and unnecessarily head. Things like the foreigners calling the Chinese as despicable and the Chinese comparing them to beasts... It really reminds one of those cheesy B movies with cheap "theatrical dialogues and plots". It is sad because there are great examples that shows that B movies don't have to be so bad.

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Chaossin
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Thank you again lol

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PrimordialHunger
PrimordialHungerLv4

Like what daoist 1324 commented, this story has a really plain and simple writing style. To be very honest, this type of writing style rarely makes me feel excited nor motivated to continue reading the story. In addition, this is my first "farming-type" of novel I am reading and I just can't seem to get into the mood/atmosphere of the story. Maybe I am really not suited for such drawn-out and slow novels. This is just my personal opinions, and I am sure some of you guys may like this. Some cons I would like to point out: - Translation Quality → Throughout the story, there are quite some grammatical errors in regards to pronouns. Sometimes, a/an plant/object is a "he/she" instead of an "it". - Story Developement → Sorry, I just don't really see where the story is developing to. Basically, the story gives me the impression that this would just be a repetitive story where the mc would just cultivate, enhance plants, solve some problems and the cycles repeats, on and on. (This statement may be really unfair for this story as I dropped at chapter 12, but I will still stick to this point of view first.) - Character design → I mean the characters are fine. The only thing I found weird was the mc didn't seem to have a goal? I mean he had one which was to get rids of his tumour. But after getting rid of his tumour, he just continued to enhanced his plants and cultivate. But the novel never told us specifically why he was cultivating. Am I right? Or did I missed out something? Yup, so basically these are just my personal opinions. A 3.2/5 for me.

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