Review Detail of Novel_Dumre in Sphinx

This book has potential. However, it's lacking in creative writing and descriptions, especially when it comes to world-building. On the bright side, the characters are intriguing and I absolutely love the mystery surrounding the plot. I have no idea where this story is going and that's what keeps me hooked. One thing that needs improvement though is the dialogue. It can get confusing at times and it would be great if the author could separate it for each character