I just read chapter 2 so I'm gonna leave an honest review of what was so far the grammar, is bit jumbled over the place. by that I mean that it's great at some points and gets weird as hell like "I'm a fuck puppy" the lack of capitalization in the story is kinda bad too everything else is ok I guess lol
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Liked it!
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!