Review Detail of Young_fruit_Smiley in Werewolf Diaries

Item: Werewolf Diaries
Rating: 2.4

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Young_fruit_SmileyLv141yrYoung_fruit_Smiley

So there's no world background ... . Character design/development is good.. . writing quality/style is bad like horrible bad.... it's readable but you can't understand what's happening ...(like: my name as a person is ysmiley. After going to job I left the keys there & in the house I have some books left to read ) . story development is meh, nothing is explained why what happened or anything for that matter 🤔.

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Though_that_then

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Though_that_then作者Though_that_then

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Young_fruit_Smiley:instead of reading different types of novels.... you should watch this on YouTube : 1- How to write a story 2- How to show not tell 3- How to seamlessly switch between characters 4- How to not skip impacts & important plot points . Good luck 🍀

1yr

Though_that_then作者Though_that_then

Thank you for the review

1yr

Though_that_then作者Though_that_then

I’m going to read different types of novels, to try and improve my writing

1yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14Young_fruit_Smiley

instead of reading different types of novels.... you should watch this on YouTube : 1- How to write a story 2- How to show not tell 3- How to seamlessly switch between characters 4- How to not skip impacts & important plot points . Good luck 🍀

Though_that_then:I’m going to read different types of novels, to try and improve my writing

1yr

ThePandaCriticLv1ThePandaCritic

Young_fruit_Smiley:instead of reading different types of novels.... you should watch this on YouTube : 1- How to write a story 2- How to show not tell 3- How to seamlessly switch between characters 4- How to not skip impacts & important plot points . Good luck 🍀

1yr