great fanfic!!! this fanfic has great potential, in my opinion. Now we come to the grammar quality. Fortunately the grammar quality is not that bad. Every now and then there is a grammar mistake but it is readable. In order to avoid these grammar mistakes you could use grammmarly. It proof reads your text!!! But you dont have to as it is still readable. Keep up the good work, author!
Phantomato_101
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!