Review Detail of king8512743 in rewriting....

It started out p good until the mc gets reincarnated in a different world (for the second time). Then it drops off, also the system is annoying asf like fr It shocks him taking out health whenever it doesn't like what he is doing. After saying all that though, I would say that the writing quality is good and some ppl might enjoy the plot, so good luck author, however I don't think I will continue reading this.