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Gizmo_48
Gizmo_48Lv141yrGizmo_48

Review at 50 chapters. I overal like the stoy. If you enjoy The Authors POV you will send probaly enjoy this. It mainly lacks in two areas. 1. Character interaction - The conversation between the MC and all side characters are quite bland and lacking. They are all quick and lack any substance or emotion. The only one that seems somewhat natural is the princess. 2. The rankings system - It uses the APOV ranking system, however, unlike the APOV system it is absolutely pointless in this novel. Every fight (literally every fight) is against someone/group of people who outrank the MC or side character by muiltple ranks yet the MC or the side character easily win without any difficulty. in on of the recent chapters i just read the MC is E- and just 1 v 5 against 5 E+ like he was taking a stroll in a park. A side character even 1 v 1 against a D+ rank when they were E rank with ease. Didnt even get a wound.

The Storms monarch is an extra

APieceOfRock

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BLACKARMOUR
BLACKARMOURLv3BLACKARMOUR

can anyone tell me if the novel is dropped or something.

APieceOfRock
APieceOfRock作者APieceOfRock

Yep, that's why I'm making a rewrite. This is literally my first attempt at any form of fiction so I was really bad.