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The shifting POVs are a bit annoying, but it gets good if you dedicate your focus and try to absorb everything. The overall plot is easy to follow, though, and so far, the worldbuilding and the charas feel fine, excited for new chaps!

The Demon of Lust: If you want to live, keep me entertained

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I'll admit that the first few chapters were a little hard to follow, and I'll do my best to clarify things in the following chapter. In the meantime, I appreciate the feedback, and I hope you have a great day.