Review Detail of WisestCat in Void Mercenaries

Hi, author here. I'm gonna give myself an honest review after putting my phone down and having this novel eat two of my power stones without giving them back 😔 Story development? well it hasn't developed very far and we're still on the "new world arc" but that's bound to end pretty soon. When there are more chapters I might change this. Character design? well most of my characters have profiles and are interconnected in some way. MC's backstory was given in the first three chapters, sure, but supposedly she's been living for millions of years so what happened? Well we don't know yet. updating stability? I update everyday save for when I occasionally spam out chapters so I'd say that's going pretty well World background? There hasn't been much revealed so far but it's pretty magic/tech based. This isn't a cultivation novel, so the magic is found within circuits and machinery. Writing Quality: Well I don't think I can be very impartial on that. Anyways for those still with me, here's what my story's about, told in the perspective of Leonard(a character you'll see if you pick this up) : Voids have many names. Mercenaries, Civil Servants, Licensed Criminals. I wouldn't say any of those are wrong, but I wouldn't say they're right either. I call Voids an escape. An escape from the people who look at you funny, an escape from the police, and for me, an escape from myself. They'd looked at me different ever since I came out with the head of an alligator. Halflings, that's what they called us. Destitute, freaks of nature. But at least they wouldn't kill me. They'd kill you. If you asked, I'd say I helped you because I thought you were interesting. That's not the truth. I hope you live well.