Writing quality: needs some improvement in my opinion, but everyone has his starts Stability of updates: It looks alright. Story development: It looks promising. Gotta keep an eye on it. Character design: Kinda looks average to today web novels. World Background: It looks promising. Additional note: Do some small edits here and there at grammatical, and it will look average for Webnovel standards.
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