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Kw0z
Kw0zLv142yr
2022-09-01 13:39

It seems the author isn’t cultured enough 🥱 No inc*$t, no lol i’s, and basically nothing else. The MC enjoys vanilla, I guess. Also, even though the grammar is good, half of the paragraph’s make no sense. Might want to get an editor or something.

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Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

cultured? you mean perv3rt p0rn-addicted touch deprived p3d0phile??

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Novel’s aren’t a depiction of reality, idiot

Kaisen1:cultured? you mean perv3rt p0rn-addicted touch deprived p3d0phile??
Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

okay p3do

Kw0z:Novel’s aren’t a depiction of reality, idiot
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

How so? I haven’t said a single p3do thing.

Kaisen1:okay p3do
Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

haha okay p3do, read your review again p3do

Kw0z:How so? I haven’t said a single p3do thing.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

I just did, and there’s nothing p3do there.

Kaisen1:haha okay p3do, read your review again p3do
Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv14

Exactly that. That’s why I don’t read stories with "Harem" tag anymore.

Kaisen1:cultured? you mean perv3rt p0rn-addicted touch deprived p3d0phile??
Xx_Royal
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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Yes

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