Review Detail of SIENDONIA in I ALSO WANT TO BE WEAK

The idea of this book is unique, a strong man who tells how he wants to be a weak person. This book has potential. However, the depiction of the world and the interaction of the characters feel a little lacking and bland. Grammar, spelling, and word choice also need to be developed to make them easier to read. Maybe the author of this book needs to ask for advice from more experienced authors. (He/She can use discord for this thing)