Review Detail of AstralNinja420 in Tachyon: Rise to villainy

If you had him reincarnated instead then we would not being seeing the primal force in the show if you based it on the show then at least give the progression of the story equal with the episodes but a little more details like what they would do in between episodes plus if the Mc is a flash fanboy then make him like cat woman as an example she does work with some heroes but also is a thief now in my opinion I would rob the mc with like 2-3 wishes no more no less then make him have the same thing as the example he steals but it’s stuff that is anything flash and his team and flash villains have but in reality he work with team flash as tachyon but at night he has a different suit and becomes Robin Hood if he comes across corrupt while taking dangerous stuff that is a “collectible” from the people that have them but he literally just steals from the villains for tech and fun but his first with is to become a speedster like Barry but his tachyon suit is like a dark metallic gray then his second wish could be I don’t know to have no emotions from his past life cause he keeps his memories but not the emotions if there is a third wish the just make him Barry older twin by like 10 minutes but tis your story so your choice but hopefully you’ll consider this idea because at this point I would not read it because I have read a lot of fanfics that have this stuff happened it’s bland[img=Mad]