Review Detail of Fictitiouz in Winds of Change (DxD)
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Hello the author here, this is my first time uploading a fanfic online so actual criticism will be appreciated. I won’t delete any reviews that complain or whine about things they don’t like since I’m too lazy to. I created this fanfic back in 2020, and it sat in a random folder in my laptop for 2 years. I write fanfics for my own fun and I have a bunch of other unfinished fanfics still on my laptop. Chapter 1 is probably my worst work out of all the released chapters so far (Chapter 12) as of writing this. Since my writing has (hopefully) changed and gotten better over the last two years, I also want to keep on improving. I also continued this as a way to improve my English, grammar, writing and storytelling. I have read a lot of fanfics on this site, great fanfics (In my opinion) left unfinished or abandoned. The rest are okay and a good past time to read, while others are just nearly identical, though, they have their own flavor (I’m not saying it’s bad, just repetitive.) I created this as a way to break away from them, yes, the MC is OP I won’t deny that. If you don’t like what’s in this fanfic, you’re free to leave or drop it. But I wish for you to read chapter 1 and go to chapter 2 and then give me judgement (Until I rewrite Chapter 1), if you like it, then thank you for your future support, if not then drop it and be on your way. My goal in this is to tell the MC’s story, I don’t just want him to go into the world and just start killing anyone who doesn’t agree with him. While a fun read at first, it gets stale, like really quickly. I want to make this into a somewhat realistic romance (In anime/manga/light novel standards) and have some build-up to it. I admit that the first 3 are a bit quick, but they’re not done with their development. I want all of his harem and the MC himself to grow, not just in power. I believe that every fanfic is already an Alternate Universe. Anyway, for anyone who likes my story, thank you for supporting me thus far, and I look forward to creating more in the future, also for anyone giving me actual criticism, I appreciate you. I can learn from that and improve. For those who do not like this fanfic, I’m sorry, I have a somewhat of a plan for this story, if it doesn’t go the way it does right now for you, it probably will never. Thank you @Lykita for pointing out my review isn’t being seen. I was wondering why I couldn’t Pin it.
Winds of Change (DxD)
Fictitiouz
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I like your novel I watch till chapter 130 and I'm going to stock up chapter so don't delete rhe fanfic lot of author do this so pleaseand chapter is long I like it thank you for your hard work keep up. and if you plan to write new fanfic could you do with tensura I like it and tensura have very potential. and thank you again
Fictitiouz:[SPOILER AHEAD FOR VOLUME 3 AND VOLUME 6] Read ahead with your own discretion. At the start of Volume 3, the Kokabiel/Holy Sword Arc starts, and Lavinia Reni is nearly killed by Azrael with the help of Nyarlathotep, but in the end survives. In Volume 6, near the end, a "war" starts and quite a lot of the harem dies (offscreen) but the notable one I wrote about was Akeno, this also included billions of normal people on earth and at least 3/4 of the supernatural, but it's reversed when the MC comes back.
Is there yuri? If so, is it at least within the harem? I consider yuri with people outside the harem cheating(even if there are plans for her to join the harem, as long as she isn't in it, then it is cheating), so just trying to make sure that I won't have to see any of that in this before reading. Sorry for bothering you with this.
xEidolon:Is there yuri? If so, is it at least within the harem? I consider yuri with people outside the harem cheating(even if there are plans for her to join the harem, as long as she isn't in it, then it is cheating), so just trying to make sure that I won't have to see any of that in this before reading. Sorry for bothering you with this.
Azrael_DAngel:i hope rias will be in harem cause in almost every dxd fanfics,, rias is being hated....
darknightofAnime:Is there anything like death of one of his harem or anything like that right
Fictitiouz:As of Volume 6, one of them comes close to it, but no one in his harem dies.
He initially lies, but is honest with them down the line. They know he reincarnated and they know about the multiverse, but the ones who know about them being formally "characters in a book/in an anime" are Ddraig and Albion.
crimson666devil:one question, does MC tell them his another world and he knows their world through an anime??
Fictitiouz:He initially lies, but is honest with them down the line. They know he reincarnated and they know about the multiverse, but the ones who know about them being formally "characters in a book/in an anime" are Ddraig and Albion.
pls author how dose our mc look because I have no idea it's very annoying no to know the discrimination of the mc
Fictitiouz:As of Volume 6, one of them comes close to it, but no one in his harem dies.
Nova_Lagacy:pls author how dose our mc look because I have no idea it's very annoying no to know the discrimination of the mc
Fictitiouz:It's part of his backstory and is a spoiler. That's why I kept it vague.
Fictitiouz:It's part of his backstory and is a spoiler. That's why I kept it vague.
LunaKindred:Why there's Jingliu in the cover? Is mc will going to honkai verse or something?
Fictitiouz:No. She's there for a reason, but the MC isn't going to Honkai verse.
