Review Detail of Blue_Torch in My Group Chat Across the Multiverse
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too many character that make it difficult to interact each other and the result author can only skip his chat with other character, and sometime they become transparent. the beginning is good, but after he get his cheat, its become boring. i think there is no need instantly give him cure for his curse and invite 4 people, because I read those grup chat from akikan, his side character also get transparent.
My Group Chat Across the Multiverse
MisterRE
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there is a person on your side that usually like talk, but he become silent the entire time, just like how yato is chatter on OG but on your fanfic it is the MC that act like yato.. your MC already have so many story for live 170 what he does, now you add another 4 character.. MC live for 170 with curse and you just solve it by buying from system, its almost the same you deny his effort to train (he did not break his curse by his own effort but bypass it with cheat) and you send them to black clover where hardwork can win against talent and noble blood. there is also element Breaking your Limit.
MisterRE:Can you explain by what you mean transparent so I can make it better