Review Detail of Sleepy_Toes in T/O/W

Umm let’s see, so first pre summoning, I didn’t notice any grammar mistakes, it was full of action and didn’t bore the reader the referencing to other characters was good it was well done and didn’t feel out of place and the reaction to him being summoned was good, I suppose the sun rising wrongly and the laughter was Asashi’s doing, it was your writing style but it felt different to your other openings so that was another plus showing you can do different things, it wasn’t too long as sometimes readers get bored from seeing a lot of time spent in the modern world in a isekai fic. Now onto post summoning, you certainly made it unique, killing the summoners is something I’ve never seen in a tensura fic, h*ll the summoning is rarely used at all, people are mostly unoriginal and just use reincarnation, you made good use of magic resistance and showed a clear use of it, there was no info dumps, those are a pain especially at the start of a fic so that’s a good thing. You also made it clear and easy to understand the mc’s personality and made them seem like an actual person rather than an unrealistic fictional character.