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Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Omniverse Trip With Gacha System (Seirei Gensouki)

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The author use the suggestions of people reading for the story. 99% of the people who respond on here are, poor and angry, and have that webnow fanfic mentality which distorts the original stories and characters and this reflects on their choices. this is already a giant negative. The world he is in is also terribly boring. Not one bit of excitement honestly, just seems like its still in the origin part of any story but 50 chapters in and still there. If these two things were changed id have given this story at least a 4.5. everything else about the story is at least up to standard or better. some of the dialogue reminds me of young masters in a Chinese novel but that can be overlooked.

Omniverse Trip With Gacha System (Seirei Gensouki)

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1の人に「いいね!」しました

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返事はありません。最初になろう!