This is a pretty good novel, I enjoyed reading the first several chapters. The author is pretty good with grammar, and pacing is good too and the actual plot and character interactions was nice to read and felt engaging. However, the poor wording really ruined the flow of reading. And the lack of updating will definitely be a dealbreaker to potential avid readers. Everything can be improved, nice start author.
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