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steller work so far, i look forward to the daily chapter.all aspects of this book are great. no complaints. yes more chapters would be great but as it is its still perfect.

Right first things first: so far there are only 8 chapters out not counting the prologue, but from what I have seen so far, I am pretty impressed. The main character has plenty, and I mean PLENTY of room for character development and growth. The world seems intruiging, and from what (very little) I have seen of the magic system it seems… at least to have some thought put into it. There is no system, which is nice, but it also means the magic system is much harder to pull off. The plot so far seems interesting, but it could dramatically crash and burn as working in the mechanics of a softer power system, like there seems to be, can leave all kinds of plot holes. I am really excited for this book and hope it will be at least as good as the author’s other one, which I have been enjoying so far. Oh and Mr Author; if you do put 18+ content in there please make sure it is in a self contained chapter that doesnt affect the story? Thanks

this book is really enjoyable. the start is dark but it feels that the MC is starting to have some good luck in the world. MC is clever and strong but not overpowered and it's just trying to live life. enjoyable book worth the read!

Overall: A solid 4* But I can say one thing for sure: The MC is quite dumb. I am a logical person and find myself very often frustrated reading about how the MC is reacting or how she does certain things. Another thing I find kind of annoying are the small but plenty written mistakes. The best example is instead of "tried", the author is ALWAYS writing "tired". I think it could be auto correction from a third party software, but this just shows the Author is not even reading her/his own work after writing. Not even once. It has a lot of slice of life, the description of the world is colourful, but the MC is doing a lot of things without any brain. You will stumble upon a lot of plot armor therefore. But: I just hope Author-san improves more and at least reads his own written work at least once for getting rid of all those small but sad grammar mistakes :)

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This story reminds me of 'Reincarnated as a fox with a system' written by godadi thought with an owl and a different story.

When I first started out on this book I had it was because I was just getting into nonhuman characters. Now I can’t help be reread the book since I forgot most of it(oops)

I like how you didnnt make her Op and made it so she had her diffi culties