Review Detail of Femboy_Novelist in Midnight Games

It's a very interesting concept, I was worried it would be a squid game clome at first, but it got way more interesting, and quick. I think the memory loss is a great plot point, and The Watcher is an intimidating antagonist. The only nitpick I have is the lack of use of punctuation, which causes alot of run on scentences and makes it hard to recognize inflection.