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Review Detail of aigotcha in Trapped With An Alpha Boss

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I normally don’t really like books like these, but here’s a comprehensive review: Writing Quality- 9/10, great, but some errors here and there. Updating Stability- 16 chapters in 11 days, 10/10 Story Development- A bit early for that imo Character Development- 7/10, might be early but so far, MC has a believable backstory, but doesn’t really act the way a person would, more like an NPC repeating things(my writing’s like that too, just practice and get help from more experienced writers) World Background- 9/10, so far it seems author’s put a lot of thought into it

Trapped With An Alpha Boss

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Yup. The characters act like that because it's just the start, and I want to start slow and soft and fun. I want to make people laugh at first before getting into the core crying part. So I say I'll make the characters feel many emotions in the future. Just wait for it! 😋🤫