What a wonderful good start we have here! I enjoyed it! Maybe you could add a little bit of sentence variety to make the novel/chapters better! But as it is, I think it will do well! I had a blast reading the first few chapters! And I plan to read it again!
Pinkyprincess
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いいねgreat stuff! And, yeah! I will definitely return and read some in my spare time! (And you're actually the author of "my immoral detective system".) awesome!!! Good luck on your novel, mate! ^^
Pinkyprincess:Thanks a lot for your review! And yes, there's a lot of drama, tragedy, romance, and fun waiting for you here!
Lol, yes. I wish I had more time and hands to write that novel. Back then, things were hectic because I was just getting married.
kuhaku_sora:great stuff! And, yeah! I will definitely return and read some in my spare time! (And you're actually the author of "my immoral detective system".) awesome!!! Good luck on your novel, mate! ^^
Wow! Congrats, mate! I'm happy for you and your partner! Yeah, we had a swap review too with that story. ~
Pinkyprincess:Lol, yes. I wish I had more time and hands to write that novel. Back then, things were hectic because I was just getting married.
kuhaku_sora:Wow! Congrats, mate! I'm happy for you and your partner! Yeah, we had a swap review too with that story. ~