Well the quality of your writing skill need to be improve more BUT the concept idea of this ff are good for a wish fulfilment story. Don't be discouraged just because some dislike and critique your story. Everyone starts from somewhere and I think everybody deserves to share the stories we tell, no matter what skill level they are at.
Rex_Zatch
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