Review Detail of The_Great_Sage69 in MHA: GAMER PATH

The story is good but my god is so hard to read because of all the grammatical errors and mistakes. It isn't unreadable by any means, pretty well written than some of the other garbage on this app but it takes alot of effort since the author uses commas and other punctuations very wrong and the sentence formation isn't great. Also, the author can't decide whether he wants a heroic and caring mc or a manipulative mc, many times it feels like the mc is bipolar when sometimes he is manipulative and other times he feels the need to be a hero or be heroic. Most of the stuff I write here isn't anything major, just a little bit of me being nitpicky. All in all a pretty good story.👍👍