Review Detail of sin_of_greed in FNAF Security Breach: GGY

thank you for the review, and yeah, that would be nice. What ideas did you have ?

okay first of all I never expected you to actually reply you have no idea how excited I am okay but first and foremost after he meets Franny and they speak for a little bit he should then proceed to meet the rest of the characters and interact with them until night time acting like the normal animatronics but when nobody's looking they act a little bit differently and at night they can truly come out they should eventually tell him about Bonnie but not on the first night security should also be tighter after all like you said they saw the animatronics were destroyed they're trying to figure out who repaired them the animatronic should be more clingy cuz they haven't seen him in years

you can even make it so that at night the animatronics start to hunt him down and they act like they did in the game but when they catch him rather than actually hurting him they just love on him

later on down the line you could even bring back William Afton or you can change it so that it is William afton's wife rather than just changing his gender or just keep it the same and have all the animatronics fight with Gregory because after all he always comes back

Well, I already have a premise going with that, so it'll be Wendy Afton

you can totally create a fight scene with this okay just like they're fighting against her eventually they win after a hard fight and then do like one of those your enemy becomes your friend situations and that's how you get her to smoothly integrate into the group

Maybe! i had my own character for the past games, maybe I'll have Gregory be my characters reincarnation or something so that way the relationships with old characters remain the same as well

you could even add your own original characters in the form of other security guards after all it's unrealistic that a place that big only has one security guard to add a little bit more Danger something that they have to avoid as well as a way to git vanny another body

Personally, I like the idea of instead of corrupting another character, I'll give Vanny literally her own body

do you might explain it to me like would it be another animatronic or just the suit

You'll just have to find out, when I get out of my writer's block, lol

since you like MLP you should check out different Royal Pony

Already have, but thanks anyway. You should read my/my friend's story 'Friendship is a Game', it's got lots to read

With more coming soon

when you start uploading don't push yourself too hard unless you get writers block again upload like 2 to 3 chapters a week always keeping some in stock in case anything happens like keep a good 5 to 10 chapters in stock

okay spedahooves we got to talk I got to know when you're going to start writing cuz if I don't know I can't continue to help you if I don't know what direction you want to take the story it's difficult to give suggestions I'm going to continue to help you as you write don't think this is a one-time thing but I need you to continue to write and what is with you just dropping every story

Not dropping, I've been busy working at Wendy's, haven't had much time to myself to write, ya know? Sorry, I'll try to update one or two some time soon but it'll only be during my few free days

when will there be more chapters

when you upload again on any of your novels you should upload two chapters one being the actual chapter and the other being a patreon because with patreon people can help support you at first you don't really have to upload anything on to it just in the future have like five extra chapters there for patrons

as much as I would like to do that, I don't have my own Patreon, nor do I have the money to start one