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Review Detail of OtakuSociety09 in RWBY: The Time Bender

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OtakuSociety09
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The written quality is good and understandable. Story development is also great, but I feel it went 1 to 100 pretty quickly after the betrayal. The character design is amazing, I like how you describe the emotions of MC and the portrayal of the situation. The world background is RWBY.

RWBY: The Time Bender

BombsAhoy626

Liked it!

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BombsAhoy626
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I had a hard time with the betrayal, so the 1-100 is something I wasn't sure I totally liked, but I had to just go with it at that point

OtakuSociety09
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I think it was fine going 1 to 100. Since it would get annoying if the mc took so long to take revenge.

BombsAhoy626:I had a hard time with the betrayal, so the 1-100 is something I wasn't sure I totally liked, but I had to just go with it at that point
Ballad
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Will MC be your typical RWBY MC who joins Beacon and drinks the whole Hero of Justice Kool aid?

Gabriel_Lopes_0941
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is it harem?