Review Detail of DMC_MAX in Tales of the Kingslayer

Ok, this is... interesting. The intro of the story is very intriguing and interesting... In other words: I am hooked! Reasons: 1.The MC has a strong character (Kind that I like) 2. Premise of the story: "How the MC was chased by a cloak, death of his friends and the deal" was extremely interesting, although there are some mistakes there. 3. Writing quality and pacing is just right, except for some minor errors... everything is great. Haven't finished the short book yet, but from what I've been seeing so far... Good job, Aliast!