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Review Detail of mow in Pokemon: The Tale of A Legend

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mow
mowLv42yrmow

I won't be unfair with rating this story even though i didn't really appreciate its direction as much, character design is the only one in which i ranked a 2 out of 5, and that is due to the MC acting more like a regular child would instead of a reincarnated person trying to act like one. That is one of the reasons i decided to drop this and as well as the pokemon talent thing it feels too wuxia for my taste with improving pokemon talent ranks and stuff i never really liked the pokemon fanfics that involved those. Now onto the other part i don't get why he developed such a quick relationship with his parents on just being there for a few days unless i guess he absorbed all of the bodies memories before appearing which i'd get but thats where the part of him acting way too childish, it just feels like a regular child and not a reincarnater trying to ACT like one. Using the excuse that he was a previous orphan might help a little since i'm going to assume he always wanted parental figures but it was never really explained if he assimulated with the memories or not(atleast in the early chapters) IMO he should still be disoriented from being reincarnated as even though he was a orphan and wanted parental figures he suddenly got yeeted out of his home world into this one and in the chapter it looks as if he had just arrived(it took the author explaining to me that he had actually been there for a few days for me to that part) .OR IM JUST DUMB AND I COMPLETELY MISSED THAT PART ENTIRELY. Anyway those two are the main reasons that i decided to drop the story as everything else doesn't seem that bad aside from the few gramatical mistakes that can easily be fixed by proof-reading.

Pokemon: The Tale of A Legend

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mow
mowLv4mow

Might come off as edgy but introducing a character that was an orphan suddenly developing love for his new parental figures that were strangers to him just a few days ago just seems like pretty lazy stuff, its as if he was introduced as such just to have that relationship from the get-go instead of building it overtime, dont get me wrong i don't really care if he develops a relationship with them or not i usually prefer no parents since they honestly are cringe to me but thats just me.

mow
mowLv4mow

Sorry for the block of text, i dont know why the website just bundles it all up.

WalterHeisenberg
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Can someone tell me why there is a rapetag?