Review Detail of Kenrio in Pokemon: The Tale of A Legend
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writing is bad, full of typos and pharagraph written in a extremely strange way. other thing is how he dont edit even when it's other show where he is wrong, he even write mc first description wrong change later but dont edit. the pace of the fic is completely messed up too simple because author want to give a dark outlook to the fic and completely mess up the fic(at least for me). he first show he will be focusing on mc gain basic strength to become a rookie trainer and the knowledge but he suddenly grow all this to the trash by having the bad guy traumatized the mc and and make the story more edgy and angst
Pokemon: The Tale of A Legend
AiLund
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thank you so much for your critique and review, my dear reader! I appreciate it and would learn from my mistakes. Considering that this is my first ever fanfic or written literature made by me, I highly regarded your words of wisdom. Anyways, the Arc where he is studying in academia is still not finished so for me, who knew what would happen in the few chapters, disagree with him slowly gaining strength. I just felt that time skipping and narrating what I planned for him to be for four years is much better than giving you guys boring chapters where he picked his first weapon and his novice training guide with his Magby. There won't be a time skip as long as the four year chapter though, at most a week or so that would likely be added in the future. So, ultimately it is still considerably early for you to say that he is not gaining basic strength slowly. Since 30+ chapters onwards is where it would show. Like I said, I appreciate the review though and critique. I would remember the mistakes I've made, and atm I've been now editing the errors in my chapters. So feel free to re-read it again if you want to. Have a good day! 👋
Author, I think you could add some warnings or labels in the synopsis. For example: # DISTRESS # DRAMA # MC IS RAPED
AiLund:thank you so much for your critique and review, my dear reader! I appreciate it and would learn from my mistakes. Considering that this is my first ever fanfic or written literature made by me, I highly regarded your words of wisdom. Anyways, the Arc where he is studying in academia is still not finished so for me, who knew what would happen in the few chapters, disagree with him slowly gaining strength. I just felt that time skipping and narrating what I planned for him to be for four years is much better than giving you guys boring chapters where he picked his first weapon and his novice training guide with his Magby. There won't be a time skip as long as the four year chapter though, at most a week or so that would likely be added in the future. So, ultimately it is still considerably early for you to say that he is not gaining basic strength slowly. Since 30+ chapters onwards is where it would show. Like I said, I appreciate the review though and critique. I would remember the mistakes I've made, and atm I've been now editing the errors in my chapters. So feel free to re-read it again if you want to. Have a good day! 👋
Bob_Uchiha_XD:Author, I think you could add some warnings or labels in the synopsis. For example: # DISTRESS # DRAMA # MC IS RAPED
Bob_Uchiha_XD:Author, I think you could add some warnings or labels in the synopsis. For example: # DISTRESS # DRAMA # MC IS RAPED