Review Detail of InternetSaint in Soul Land -Auxiliary System

Item: Soul Land -Auxiliary System
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InternetSaintLv11yrInternetSaint

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Soul Land -Auxiliary System

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Thanks for your review. Can you please state a few places where I can improve myself? Thanks.

1yr

InternetSaintLv1InternetSaint

No problem.

Silver_pen:Thanks for your review. Can you please state a few places where I can improve myself? Thanks.

1yr

InternetSaintLv1InternetSaint

I didn't even read the story, just from the description and tags I already know you don't have the right mindset to write a good story.

Silver_pen:Thanks for your review. Can you please state a few places where I can improve myself? Thanks.

1yr