I like the story itself, and the characters too. It's easy to read without paying attention to the time going by, but. There are mistakes and you know it. Those mistakes distract, keep you turning back to read again and understand. I highly recommend you to use any app that can correct your mistakes, I use "Grammarly" and was never disappointed by using it. Also, personal advice, try to separate dialogue and description. It will ease reading and helps to better understand the things going on. Good luck!
HuangTian1156
Liked it!
いいねThat's true, though the story has good potential, a little bit of improvement and you'll be a star🌟 I'll keep reading, I like stories about magic academy/school. [img=recommend]
HuangTian1156:Thank you very much for letting me know about my mistake. I will try to improve it. After all, as a new author, there are bound to be mistakes.